The trees were swaying in the wind when the helicopter goes past the trees. The trees are big long and they have a brown trunk with green leaves. The leaves were as, green as the grass the swaying leaves in the wind, they were as majestic as life as the helicopter goes past the, leaves on the tree. The water was as bright as a baby blue crystal while it goes down the big stream it is on. The palm trees were swaying in the wind like a helicopter is moving in the wind. The water was clear as glass as it goes slowly down the majestically stream.
WALT-Recraft our writing to add more descriptive language
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