Tuesday 5 March 2019
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Hey Amyleigh,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading what you already knew about dinosaurs and your summary of the first couple of pages was wonderful. You used the topic sentences to help you and then put it in your own words. That was very effective.
On the next couple of pages you use the diagrams, which is effective, but then you forget about the topic sentences. Perhaps go back and add to it, using the topic sentences. This will help you to make it clearer.
Awesome to see you finishing your work off at home! Go you good thing! :)